Entry 9

We had shown what we have of our film opening to a group of year 11 pupils who had given us some positive critisim.
Some of the critisim that was given was:

• Camera angles were good. Especially the point of view shot.
• The downwards tilt that was used when Isabelle fell on the floor.
• The young people believed that the genre of the opening was identifiable.

Some of the things that the young people believe could be changed in order to make the film opening more appealing were:

• Including titles within the film opening.
• The use of a tripod within the opening could have made the opening more smooth. This would have prevented the shaky effect that we now have.
• Our opening needs to be cut as it it over the maximum time of 2 minutes by 30 seconds.
• Contemporary music could be used to show what young people may listen to today.

We will take the critisim that was given to us and improve our opening in the final edit so that we can try and gain the highest marks possible.